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I could count the starrs by day..
and by night?
I might come out to play
and by sleep?
I might dream to save some time....
-you could come sleep with me......
we could put together our pillows-
and cringe at the thought of scary dreams

Author's Note

est. '04
14 y.o. Elaina

Reviews

[BryanS]

Interesting poem as usual. You propose concepts/actions that are contradictory: "count the stars by day"
and "dream to save some time."
Subtle sexual overtones of adolescent
girl.
I like it quite a bit.
There was one typo : starrs not stars.

[Elaina Monroe]

I wrote starrs that way because that's how i wrote it when I was 14. I was obsessed with double lettering words.

[BryanS]

My apologies, dear. I thought it was a typo. This is poetry, so "poetic license" applies.
Do post more items.
Can I be "your neighbor" as Mr. Rogers would say?