Bi-Polar

Bi-Polar

A Poem by Elemiah
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The title says it all...I thought about writing more, but I like it how it is.

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Mania

Joy, Happiness, Elation

Energizing, succeeding, living

Free, Alive, Alone, Dead

Disheartening, Dejecting, Falling

Guilt, anger, loneliness

Depression

Anxious, Shy, irritable

Crying, failing, lying

Small, isolated, awake, euphoric

Jumping, laughing, thinking

Aware, artistic, Fearless

Mania

 

Up

 

 

Down

 

           Repeat

 

                        The       Cycle

          

          Again

 

 

 

© 2008 Elemiah


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Thats crazy cool! I like the jumbled words, and how well they fit the words!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awsome write!!! Very creative and just so true.You've got my vote!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


that is so cool i love the way the font is. it speaks to me! haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow so creative

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well done in my eyes too. I read your other review and I like what was said. I go through those feelings like every day and it's within a few mineuts that I change so quickly... Very good any way though! Kudos!!!! And I'm sorry I can't spell that good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A tough and difficult thing to write about I know but Iike the dislocated flow of the words which describes the disease rather well - especially the manic episodes although the lows as well. Kudos to you for taking on the task - very well done.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 12 Years Ago


That was an interesting way to write a poem. The way that you wrote the words, and the poem, changed how it effects/affects (i can never get those right >

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, I really like how you used the actual placement of the text and the font size to impact the poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Um...wow... Remember that I told you about my uncle? This is just like him...I suspect his is more arbitrary and related to what he wants and wants not to do, but...

Also sounds like other people I know...I really like it...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Elemiah
Elemiah

Buxton, NC



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