The Time of Goodbyes

The Time of Goodbyes

A Poem by Eli_Wolf-Queen
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First poem, don't judge to harshly please.

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Death, such a funny time,

Mentions of a past, half remembered those with a mind.

Coming in the dead of night,

Leaving nothing to believe in, not even the light.

© 2019 Eli_Wolf-Queen


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A deep and searching piece for a first poem with a morbid feel in a short but challenging rhyming write. Be careful about trying to rhyme every poem and try freeverse as well as it allows more leeway. All in all a good first offering.

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Added on May 16, 2019
Last Updated on May 16, 2019
Tags: romance, death, sadness

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Eli_Wolf-Queen
Eli_Wolf-Queen

Hastings, NE



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I enjoy watching the sunset and the sunrise. I enjoy staying home rather than going out and partying with people I don't know. And I enjoy watching television shows that interest me. more..

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