I need you

I need you

A Poem by Elie Marie
"

needing the safety of your arms

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I need you
I need you
and your arms
I want to fall into you
be enveloped in your arms
I want the safety and comfort
we have together
I want to breathe you in
that smell of home and love
To hear your sweet words
your smiling words
that you breathlessly whisper to me. 
I want you
I want you here
for me to hold
for me to fall into
when the world gets too much
and the safety of our reality
anchors me down.  

© 2015 Elie Marie


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Love the meaning!
Keep it up!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elie Marie

9 Years Ago

thank you. I didn't work hard at this. I feel like it's kind of lacking but that's just how they go .. read more
nice poem Elie ,I enjoyed the wordings.
Spend some more time on writing and you can elevate your work from nice to great.

armin. ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elie Marie

9 Years Ago

thanks. Yea, it's not one of my bests, I know.

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Added on January 7, 2015
Last Updated on January 7, 2015
Tags: need, love, safety, anchor

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Elie Marie
Elie Marie

London, United Kingdom



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I write to breathe. I write for me, not you. I write to stay alive. I've never gotten feedback or been part of anything like this, I'd love to hear what anyone other than me thinks of my words.. more..

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