Jumbled UP

Jumbled UP

A Poem by Elie Marie

I want to sit here

snuggled up in blankets

comfy comfy blankets

and read

i want to read it all

all the words

and all the feelings

I want to feel it all

soak it up

and think my way through it

and be happy

fall asleep with a smile on myself.




a possibility

because I have me

and that has to be enough.

But it all gets jumbled

in my head


I lose track

of what's real

and what's not.

My heart

won't lead me astray.

But my head will.

Your head will.

Heads do that,

they get all jumbled up.

© 2015 Elie Marie

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"fall asleep with a smile on myself." this really made me smile, a very cosy poem fun to read and easy to relate to as a writer and a fan of writing - well done thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago

Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
I totally love this. I know exactly how this feels. Especially when I'm writing something. Sometimes, as I hunt for ideas, it all just comes in a rush, and I have to stem the intellectual tide of ideas. I think it is great that you also connected the the power of the heart to this. Thanks for writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
i have a favorite line ... :)
"fall asleep with a smile on myself."
very enjoyable read .. stellar levels of comfy/cute .. and a great little contrast with the closing lines .. very easy flow in your free verse form!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thank you so much E :)

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3 Reviews
Added on January 20, 2015
Last Updated on January 20, 2015
Tags: jumbled, brain, heart, reading, thoughts, feelings, poetry


Elie Marie
Elie Marie

London, United Kingdom

I write to breathe. I write for me, not you. I write to stay alive. I've never gotten feedback or been part of anything like this, I'd love to hear what anyone other than me thinks of my words.. more..