One Night Fall

One Night Fall

A Poem by Ellie Howard
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really short poem as an assignment for my writing class,we had to write a love poem so,i took to an under tone of an erotic romance...very subtly;also reflects my thoughts of this year and more.

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A fervor in your moan,

And a tender heat in your sigh.

A fervor in your kiss,

An everlasting moment in your high…

A romance meant forever,

But only for tonight,

One night, atop your stargaze manor,

In your hold,

So fervent and warm,

An ardor passion

Meant only for our eyes.

© 2013 Ellie Howard


Author's Note

Ellie Howard
In my mind i wrote about 2 men falling in love as result of an affair... just inspired by an amazing 30+ story i recently read.

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I really like this one, so good!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That's pretty interestin' ...ain't it...??
as ya said that you inspired by 30+'s story's...that's nice too, i read out sth unique.
An ardor passion
Meant only for our eyes....these two lines're pretty one's, words're powerful in each line. great one, i think you inspired deeply..lol....well written

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great description and good use of words. A passionate journey in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


i liked how you have penned this. nice words picking and sweet images. i loved the music flowing through the lines..i have really enjoyed reading this..

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Ellie Howard
Ellie Howard

San Antonio, TX



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I'm 16 years old, and i'm in love with writing and literacy education. Writing is one of the only ways, besides my art, where i can express how i feel with confidence. Even though i'm not the religio.. more..

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