Little Lost Treasure.

Little Lost Treasure.

A Poem by Ellary™
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They still do not come to look, my whole life from me they took.

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LITTLE LOST TREASURE.

Words by Holly, Rhyme by Ellary.

 

 

I stand here alone, their little lost treasure.

 They will not come look; to any measure.

 

I know not what to do;

What would you do, if it were you?

 

I stand here alone, their little lost treasure.

I'm by myself, stranded from pleasure.

 

They still do not come to look;

My whole life from me they took.

 

In their memory I will remain;

As for now my life I must sustain.

 

But now that I'm here, I mind as well stay.

And watch the sun set behind the empty bay.

© 2010 Ellary™


Author's Note

Ellary™
OKAY. So my friend Holly started a story, and she wrote like A paragraph. It was SO discriptive, I just told her to make it into a poem. But I ended up doing it...
This is really like my first attempt at poetry. It probably sucks, but I'm a terrible judge when it comes to Poetry. So I want you to tell me...

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It is an interesting poem and thought provoking but I want to know the rest of the story. There is more here than what I am reading and my mind cannot finish and close in the gap. I know there is more. Ha Ha.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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