I dont want to be hurt

Here I thought it would diminish

apparently not, so not finished.

I tried my best, I should of done more

wish I could turn back time, like it was before.

I don't know why, I cant commit

I'm ready but not, d****t

I should know by now, how to stop

looked like it was easy, or so I thought

when it comes to those times, when its high

its hard to deplete it, as I bite my lip and sigh

with all this going on, I'm not even good

I don't have rhythm, I f**k it up

I get worried, I tell myself to shut up

f**k this, f**k that! that's how it ends

awkward glances and judged whispers

I don't want to be hurt

Reviews

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

I love this poem because it leaves you thinking. I am sure that you are suffering but from what is unclear. Poems to me are about putting your feeling into words and hoping someone somewhere can relate to them. The raw emotion in this poem is very well conveyed and even though it does not tell the whole story I do not feel like I was left hanging. Great write!

[ThisIsElle_huh]

thanks Jessica for your review, you are absolutely right about what you've said and i guess i do you that in my poems. x