Boy Game

I want you to cradle my heart

In your palms.

Even though I burned yours.

I want you to love me

But I won't love you in return.

I know I don't play fair.

But that's your fault

For deciding to chase me

In the first place.

Pretending for you

Is not allowed.

This is my game

And I always win.

Reviews

[Glenna.]

That was most definitely relatable to the boys I have come across. You're good. :)

[Ferg]

very nice twist in this piece.......you are a clever writer

[Wicahpi]

very crafty! "catch me if you can" kind of tale.
good job!

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i would so doo that to somebody. great writing btw. ^_^

[Havatara]

I know many people who have been in this situation. It was wonderfully written. Nice job and I can't wait to read more or your work.

[ape domenigoni]

nice write! I know what it's like to want someone to love you without returning the favor. clearly written...keep up the good work!