Your Image

You have been

On my mind

All day.

I close my eyes

And see your beautiful face.

I am yours

And you are mine.

Don't leave my mind

Or I will be sad and hurt.

My eyes are still closed

Because I wish for your face

To stay on my mind forever.

Reviews

[Mary]

Very nice it was sweet and touching:)

[aching.insomniac]

i likes.

[alec merdin]

very good i could fell the emotion as i read it.I am sure almost everybody on the planet has felt this i know i have more than once great job!

[ATG]

Aww. That is a sweet poem. Very expressive as usual.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i will never leave

[Luna]

This is the feeling of a new relationship. It's great.

[Wicahpi]

The last three lines bring this short sweet poem to a dreamy conclusion.
I enjoyed the read!

[Aiza]

lovely poem.
the feeling of longing for the one you love...
and seeing their face every time you blink..
beautiful.
great job =]