No One Here

No one knows me.

Nor do I know them.

I wish I knew.

For then I would have friends.

Or at least people who care.

My loneliness shadows me

And no light has shown my way.

I feel so alone

With no one here.

Reviews

[Song in the Farmland]

Omigosh this is so how I feel right now at my new school, ecspecially because it's so hard to make friends because all these stupid pointless cliques... *sigh* Anyways great job!

[Subjective Sanity]

I love it! I can relate to that feeling. I'm making this one of my favorites!

[Meaghan M]

Wow, this is amazing. I'm going to write this one down. You did a brilliant job, and the simplicity does make it that much more powerful. Well done.

[Vember Judgement]

I spent a whole decade with these feelings and understand them all too well. Very simple telling of said emotions, which works for me.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

very nice I think its a good poem and though its simple it captures the readers attention!

[QuothCorvid]

You capture a feeling we all feel at some point. Self doubt. Well done. From an older view point you would be surprised to know just how many of your friends feel the same way you do! Put your self out their to a variety of people, true friends can be found, but not if you wall yourself off!

[cest la vie]

You are never alone.. You are your own best friend.. remember that..
Sad, yet beautifully wrriten piece.

[Blue tailed kite]

Simple and yet touching....

[sweetylee1994]

This poem was awesome. You are a very talented writer. I enjoyed reading it.

[broken_inside]

awwws thats so beautiful i can feel ur power keep up the good work hun1