From Myself

Dear God,

 

Please come save me

From myself.

I am not right

In this place.

I do not belong here

So I am willing

To take myself from this place.

Please come save me

From my darkest demon.

Please come save me

From myself.

Reviews

[Jade Black]

Great work! The repetition of some of the words, and the sense of honest desperation really strengthens this poem.

[Blossom]

VERY HONEST. REALLY BEAUTIFUL

Such a very honest and straight-forward piece of poetry. I believe it is representative of a sentiment so many people can relate to and place themselves inside of. Well done.

I think you even spoke for me here. amazing. :)

[Buddhistboy73]

I really like this piece. It speaks from the heart and is not afraid to express difficult emotions that we experience as human beings. It takes courage to write this freely, and I am sure that you will definitely have a breakthrough in your life. I know, because I have been/am in this space from time to time, and it takes only 1 degree of courage to change.......good luck...:)

[Angel Bird]

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A piece of an abysmally depth. These words are the words of someone on the verge - on the verge of breaking down completely - OR - as I believe on the verge of standing up and facing the truth and fight to regain the life that was given to you from higher powers.

Wonderfully expressed and deeply touching poem. Very impressive!
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[Wondering Mind]

I often find beauty in simple, yet deep writing. Thanks for sharing.

[Cody Wiggins]

Wow. This is really great. Especially after having the psychology talk that we did. This poem is beyond proof that everyone's greatest weakness is themselves.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Nice writing i really enjoyed it.. Short but good.