Don't Love Me

I thought you died

In that horrendous fire.

But you were resurrected

And saved my life.

You shouldn't have saved me

And now I hate you.

Please don't love me

Cause all I wish to do

Is hurt you.

So save your time

And walk the other way

From my devilish gaze.

I am a demon

And you were saved today.

Reviews

[No regret]

Its amazing !!! great .

[AllyKinzz:)]

Wow, i thought is was going to be different. As i read on i was like, "woah, complete u turn." But thats not a bad thing. Surprise is a good element to writing. You by the way stuffed this poem with the element of surprise. Every line was a eye catcher in its self. Great job.

Review back and share the love! :D

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interesting concept..

[Crinkle°]

I should send you someone...
great work, otherwise

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

strong words in each phrase, i really enjoyed reading it. Great work.

[Anicca]

Intense! I enjoyed this a lot! Nice write!

[DreamerLauren]

Simply amazing. ♥

This is intense and I find intensity to be rather beautiful. I could see images flashing in my head while reading this. Excellent. Keep it up.

[Roberta]

I love.