Just Another

Just another phantasmal blare

Just another lucid barrage 

Just another consort’s adieu

Just another night like this 

 

Just another futile feed

Just another rapping comment 

Just another off-course review 

Just another night like this 

 

Just another hack of conviction 

Just another crock of grain

Just another haunting dismay

Just another night like this 

 

Just another glacé suspire

Just another gull likeness 

Just another tragic awe 

Just another night like this

 

Just another chiseled pipe dream

Just another drilling chasm

Just another hearty vagabond

Just another night like this

 

 

-Leah

Reviews

[Jasmine]

I know the poem is called "Just Another", but I feel you've over-used the phrase. I felt this at the end of the second verse, when i realised how many more "just Another"s there infact were!

BUT, other than that, your actual words are wonderful; you use beautiful language.
Please don't hide it with the drilling repetition.

This poem could be an absolute gem!