Thursday Night Downpour

One of the first haikus I have done. I hope it turns out well!

Pools of yellow light

Shivering on a wet path

Shatters reflections

 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent little poem that has pure beauty!

[FocusedAmnesia]

Amazing imagery in this little haiku!

[light and ashes]

so little said, yet the content holds such beautiful imagery,
proving that it is not the quanity but quality that truely matters.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Cool!

[SugarlessGiRL]

Nicely done, paints a pretty image in my mind~ love it~

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful!

[BlackCl0ud]

Great, I imagine street lamps making puddles yellow then a child jumping in them. This makes me smile innocently. ~ BlackCl0ud with love

[Evan Kleve]

Lovely lovely lovely :) A pure delight to read!