Dear Love, Dear Friend

This is another poem I wrote in my Creative Writing class. Enjoy!

Dear love, dear friend

How could you leave me?

All alone with no other than this

Ink laid across this page

 

Since you were gone "

Or more say useless "

I say my final goodbye.

I treasured the times

We had together

Writing away our feelings across the paper

Carrying our burdens as friends.      

 

I’m sorry I used you

So much you suffered so

That your blood flowed out

Until you could write no more.

 

Thus, I am forced to continue on without you

My love

My dear, dear friend

My one, and only

Favorite pen.

Author's Note

Anything is good! Thanks much! ^^

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poetry.
"My love
My dear, dear friend
My one, and only
Favorite pen."
Above lines were my favorite. You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emiko Tagahushi]

Thank you very much for reviewing my poetry, Coyote. ^^ I also love those last lines. They make me laugh every time.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was a very good line and you are welcome.