Things you forget about people

Things you forget about people

A Poem by Duckey

They say the first thing you forget about someone
Is their voice
And it's true
I don't remember your voice 
I remember how it made me feel 
Safe
Happy
But i can't hear you anymore

They say the next thing 
Is that you can't picture their face
And it's true
I don't remember your eyes
i don't remember your smiles
But I remember how they made me feel
Like i was loved
cared for
valued

They say you forget their walk
How they move
and it's true
But i remember how it felt
to walk side by side with you
Hand in hand
Our shoulders brushing
and our footsteps in time
But i can't see it anymore 

But I will never forget
How you made me feel 

© 2015 Duckey


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Their is a truth and deep sadness in your words. Experiencing the disappearance of such things from our memories is harsh and that is why I plan on recording (via video and audio) those around me I love, so that I can always be reminded of their voices, their faces and their movements. Good write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Duckey

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) That's very kind of you xx
....................

9 Years Ago

You are kindly welcome! Keep up the great writing :)
Duckey

9 Years Ago

I will :) Thankyou



Reviews

Their is a truth and deep sadness in your words. Experiencing the disappearance of such things from our memories is harsh and that is why I plan on recording (via video and audio) those around me I love, so that I can always be reminded of their voices, their faces and their movements. Good write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Duckey

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) That's very kind of you xx
....................

9 Years Ago

You are kindly welcome! Keep up the great writing :)
Duckey

9 Years Ago

I will :) Thankyou

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

105 Views
1 Review
Added on February 9, 2015
Last Updated on February 9, 2015

Author

Duckey
Duckey

Perth , Australia



About
Hi! My name is Emily, I am from Australia and i write a lot of sad poetry, and sometimes short stories. I have loved reading ever since i was little, and now as i have gotten older i have learnt to lo.. more..

Writing
Talk Her Down Talk Her Down

A Poem by Duckey