Die for a love

What was you and I?

We weren't the same

I thought you'll stay by myside

I guess we'll never be the same;

 

I cry everynight

praying for our love

seems we only fight

but I can't help our dying love;

 

I try to hide the pain

but I was broken

I stop to hope to regain

but you were taken;

 

I'll hold your heart

fill it with joy everyday

never let you fall apart

but you want me to stay away;

 

Promised to not shed a tear

for I broke because of a lie

now I live in fear

hoping I'll die.

Reviews

[Faffy]

this is an intense feeling of pain and suffering, its a very beautiful and very powerful poem, loved it!

and like killer said they dont even know what they are missing =)

-Roshan

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks I just wish he could've stayed by myside :/

[Faffy]

you deserve someone who love you back not someone who plays with your heart for fun =/

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

It hurts me when I see him at school everyday :'(

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

I do have someone that loves me but he lives so far away and he's 19 so there is no way I'm seeing him and I don't think he would take me back because whatI did to him :/

[Faffy]

"the heart is slow to learn where the mind beholds every turn", it will get better =)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

hopefully :)

[Faffy]

thats the spirit! keep on smiling =)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

:D

[Killer]

The person who hurt you. Dosen't even know what they're missing. Honestly I felt this intense insufferable pain before.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thank you so much :')

[Killer]

Its no problem really :) If you ever wan5t to talk just say so

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

okay thanks