death underneath skin

thoughts of feelings

cuts bleed through skin

blood rushing down

cover in blood, that's thin

thoughts going around

just a sound of a pin

tears roll, i crash to the ground

pain only hurts on skin

 

what's there to seak

red appears underneath me

couldn't even speak

tears flow, i can't see

pain is to hard to keep

feelings couldn't be

cuts were to deep

 

colors to my eyes

i fall from above

i only know how to cry

blood wasn't able to prove?

list all hate before i die

leaving the only one last love

death underneath skin say good-bye

Reviews

[chance2]

wow, it was very good . i prefer dark writing and this was great.

[realmwriter]

Grammatical and spelling errors aside, I really enjoyed this piece. And the title is fantastic. Death becomes you. Very good.