Thinking of you...Can this be true?

Candle-lit lips puckering
Goosebumps caused by breath
Intimate attention drawn by touch

Pressing together bodies
A chin turned toward delight
An arm flexed with insight
Hips closing in...two eyes lock

Time stops
Dreaming occurs
A halt
The wind blows
Tall-grass sways
Fingertips out reaching
Toward the ability to provide an answer to...
How can this be true?

Author's Note

Always and forever...thinking of you!

Reviews

[Gabrielle Travis]

Intense and thought provoking. I liked how the suggestion of attraction, physicality, and emotion were relayed so powerfully with minimal words. It left the mind to "fill in" scenery, person, cell memory, ect...with one's own personal experiences in order to directly relate. Oh and one more thing...It was effing HOT!!! lol Well done!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

all I can say is WOW blew me away

[limbalring]

Time stops
Dreaming occurs
A halt
The wind blows
Tall-grass sways
Fingertips out reaching
Toward the ability to provide an answer to...
How can this be true?

Wow. Tremendous insight into the awe of attraction. Loved it.

Such a rich imagery, and phrased so wonderfully in the true essense of love...
Excellent write xx