A cup full of emptiness

written for the Sonneteers, Lend me your tears" writing ocntest hosted by Fran Marie

 

The heart whispers, the soul sighs
Love is a splendid thing in my eyes
To be with you, I’m yearning
The ways of love, I’m learning
While I wait on the tide’s turning
The flames of love keep burning


Tossed and blown, this pain I feel
So, show me what’s really real
And still, I sigh, why oh why do I
Feel such emotion at the dream
I’m coming apart at the seam
A cup filled with of emptiness,
That's the cup I’m drinking of
Until I can drink your cup of love

Reviews

[sheerpoetry]

this piece shows the classic beauty of poetry. well done

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

you rock chicklettte!! i really love this lil poem...hope God is blessing you with happiness x0x0x0xx0

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and beuatiful.
well written too