How deep my love

 

Beloved, come lay where you feel rest
Your head softly against my warm breast
~~*~~
I give myself to you, a solid shield
Find comfort in this strength I wield
~~*~~
Though you are man, you may have a doubt
And not be sure of what this life is about
~~*~~
When life’s storm blows swiftly our way
Shaking the foundation of which we lay
~~*~~
At that time, the little boy in you may awaken
Be assured, by my side you’ll never be forsaken
~~*~~
Take my love; let it be your blanket of security
Against all odds, we’ll face life's obscurity

 

Reviews

[Jibey]

Some beautiful thoughts threading through this... and the idea of a man being like a boy and held to the comfort of the breast is so very stirring and delightful... There is a little boy within every man that wants to be cuddled and shielded...

[Katie]

I love this! I was going to pick out my favorite lines but I realized I would be copying the entire poem. It is such a beautiful thing what love can make you feel. Keep writting!!

[mystic soul]

nice one!! very well written.... i fully agree with her you are good at romantic poems.... great job :)

[*~Kristy~*]

I liked this one as well...Reminded me a lot of how I feel about my boyfriend...I just love him to death...This poem made me realize that... :)
Good job, you are very good at romance poems