so close//almost done

so close//almost done

A Poem by Ma'at

i am so close to being done
so close to leave
as they get more and more angry with me
the more i get angry with myself
the more i lose it
why am i still here?

© 2015 Ma'at


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You've really expressed anger so well here. This is short and simple but packed with emotion and detail. A great write. Very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Anger. Good reason to release good words. Should I stay or should I go. Good song. Better to stay. Next place can be less fruitful. Good poetry. Made me think too.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've been asking myself that for a while...if you are talking about this place. :) Nice one my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

i was talking about multiple things really :) thank you
willweb

9 Years Ago

I know...we all have our places we wish we weren't.
The sun always rises again the next day. Stay positive:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
That's the big question I guess, why do we let ourselves go through with it over and over, are we waiting for a break or are we too scared to go? Like the tone of frustration, hope all is well now, however, nice write and thanks for sharing~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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