My Handsome

This is another poem written for my boyfriend.

Enclosed in the crowd,

I can always find you.

Through all the people,

I can always find you.

 

As I drift into dreamland,

I can always find you there.

While I day dream,

I can always find you there.

No matter where I go,

Or what I do,

You are always there.

 

I replay all of our memories,

Never leaving my mind.

Your laugh is my favorite harmony,

Never leaving my mind.

Your words remain in my thoughts,

Never leaving my mind.

The feel of your touch is marked on my skin,

Never leaving my mind.

 

I'm always thinking of you.

Author's Note

I haven't shared this poem with him yet. I would like any suggestions on how to improve it.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Your laugh is my favorite harmony,

Never leaving my mind.

Your words remain in my thoughts,

Never leaving my mind.

The feel of your touch is marked on my skin,

Never leaving my mind."

Very romantic . Very sweet ...:)............

[S.C.]

Thanks. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[Daffy]

You love him. Love is to be cherished. It comes through in the poem, you lucky girl. Love is precious. Cherish it so very much. Share it with him. Don't be afraid. I can tell you so much, but it won't do any good. You need to share it with him. You love him. Do not be afraid of love, it is wonderful. Lol Daffy

[Zach]

I really like the repetition. It really drives home that feeling of almost desperation. Do you want to forget or do you want to hold tight???? anyways, thanks for the review on my writing.

[S.C.]

You're welcome. And thanks.

[Luke L]

Lovely sentiment. Who is this about?

[S.C.]

Thanks. This is about my boyfriend. I gave it to him today.

[Luke L]

awesome very heartfelt

[S.C.]

Thanks. I don't know if he liked it though :/

[Lydia Shutter]

Awwww.....so very romantic. Very sweet write. I am sure he will like it just the way you have written it. Lydi**

[S.C.]

Thank you very much.