Heaven Help Me.

you bring me to this

you make me pray 

when I don’t believe

wipe your nose

I’ll give you my sleeve

the moment you step

inside my mind

waters grow turbulent

waters rise

 

I believe in senses now

I believe in vibes

love pummeled ruthlessly

my unsuspecting eyes

heaven help me

you do this to me

this oh so pleasant 

insanity

you curl my toes

and my mind

heaven knows

I'm entwined

you bring me to this

heaven help me

I'd beg for you

stupidly

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

"Wipe your nose I'll give you my sleeve" has such schooldaze connotations. Or nurturing one's. The object of the speakers desire is way younger and brings out the motherly side. But curling toes are for lovers perhaps of a taboo nature.
The prayers aren't for bringing them together but for the strength to resist.
Another belter write Enigma Monster.
; )

[Enigma Monster]

I never thought closely about whether it was about bringing them together or resisting. But I think you're right, when I step back and look at the situation as a whole, it is about resisting. Resisting someone you love so much that even their snot doesn't bother you. "Heaven help me" because it's pointless. Thank-you for the enlightening review!

[Tony Jordan]

Resisting is more fun.
Snot can be cleaned - or rolled into neat balls to flick at our arch-enemy.
Lol
It was my pleasure E. M.

[Sikandar Khan]

It looks like someome fall in love deeply Nice...

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is pretty awful.
Not awful in the bad writing sense, it is awful
because it reminds me of the hell-hole that appears to be my mind.
Of course I understand you----who would`nt ? You have two or three kids, work in an office and I can imagine the rest. We could just trade rants. Better yet,
write me.
----- Eagle Cruagh