Red.

Red.

A Poem by Enigma Monster

fury at the one I love
I cannot look above
disproportionate rage
I see red through a cage

steamy love
unexplained, it just comes
submit to him, submit to lust
I see red in him I trust

sunshine's yellow
doesn't count
moods are blue
figure it out

bloodshot eyes
nail me to a cloud
red is strength
when in doubt

red is me
heated blood
red is queen
it's everything

© 2017 Enigma Monster


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My friend used to describe 'red mist' when he got angry and I couldn't relate but I guess Mervyn was always angry so it was a moot point.
I see the red in this an being all-enveloping not a mist more like a thick mire that taints every single aspect - giving the feel of superhuman strength

'nail me to a cloud...' is just wow!

yellow sun and blue moods still equate to red.
Exciting fury here Enigma Monster!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enigma Monster

7 Years Ago

Thank-you Tony. I could explain almost everything with the color red. Good and bad. I love it so muc.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Yeah I think the word 'just' would have softened it too much.
Its funny how we are drawn to a.. read more



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Posted 7 Years Ago


My friend used to describe 'red mist' when he got angry and I couldn't relate but I guess Mervyn was always angry so it was a moot point.
I see the red in this an being all-enveloping not a mist more like a thick mire that taints every single aspect - giving the feel of superhuman strength

'nail me to a cloud...' is just wow!

yellow sun and blue moods still equate to red.
Exciting fury here Enigma Monster!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enigma Monster

7 Years Ago

Thank-you Tony. I could explain almost everything with the color red. Good and bad. I love it so muc.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Yeah I think the word 'just' would have softened it too much.
Its funny how we are drawn to a.. read more

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