My first attempt at HAIKU

My first attempt at HAIKU

A Poem by Mehak Mushtaq

Thy dear pretty world,
Poison juices, poison love
In holy flowers.

© 2013 Mehak Mushtaq


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very good first attempt. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Winner, winner, chicken dinner! First one, you hit it to the moon!

Love 'holy flowers'. Great one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

haha, thank you Frieda. :)
Nice first attempt... in fact I like that a lot. Religion can corrupt because they are actually man made.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

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Mehak Mushtaq
Mehak Mushtaq

Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India



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Assalam-u-alaikum. Mehak, from Kashmir, India. I got introduced to Writer's cafe just two years, ago, I'm 18, now. Like colors, life is an illusion, too. Look inside of you, the devil you hide, the.. more..

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