"Lover"

"Lover"

A Poem by EricGodsil
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Complete experiment.

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Let me be the 
your   secrets     sheets.
       

© 2011 EricGodsil


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Very clever!

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow, very clever;) i never could have thought of it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


What it says, well what I want it to say in fewer words is, "let me be the secrets between your sheets." I want to mess with the formatting like it did for "Everlasting Proof."

Posted 11 Years Ago


shouldnt it be secret?
and w ell,
ofcourse, i think of sheets as warmth ,
and warmth = support
so if you are her secret sheets, or your secret sheets,
then you are probably
a support for someone, without letting it know to anybody else
except the one your supporting, and caring for

Am i way off?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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EricGodsil
EricGodsil

Virginia Beach, VA



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I love to write. Usually I have to feel inspired though; which could be brought on by anything at any moment. I suffer from writers block for a good chunk out of a year. Once I start writing though I .. more..

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