War

War

A Poem by ErisedK

If war is the embodiment of dignity,
Shall we preserved it for eternity,
Later we can order some despair,
Or just a sprinkle of bloody victory.

Never I, myself seen a battle,
The instinct itself said its fatal,
We all wish to live in peace,
May all the guns will be seized.

The blood of innoncence spilled,
Along with the sense of guilt,
A paper to sign agreed to quit,
O' leader hurry hold to your quill!

© 2017 ErisedK


Author's Note

ErisedK
Lets love each other and make our world a better place. Our home, our world and our peace.

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Very good moving piece. Flow and theme hold strong together. And you let reader to make own opinion well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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ErisedK

7 Years Ago

Thank you..
Yes, war is undoubtedly brutal. It's interesting how you mention "eternity" because war has pretty much happened since the first humans were around.

Best for us to explore all peaceful resolutions before war is considered!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ErisedK

7 Years Ago

I agree with your opinion.
Let the ink spilled but not the blood.

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