Far..far away?

Can you imagine

my taste..my smell?

just by standing there?

Watching me..

can you see through me?

can you read me?

can you also feel my fears,

my love, and my passion?

So can you imagine the real me?

Can you even imagine me..my taste and smell?

Author's Note

One of my very first poems and no one ever saw what I write. Will appreciate a lot the reviews and advices.

Reviews

[Bradley]

This reminded me of when I was living alone and I became depressed. All I wanted was for someone to know me better, but I created the distance that prevented that from happening. Now I have someone in my life that can answer yes to all those questions. Of course, someone could interpret this the opposite way, I suppose.

Since you provoked an immediate response in me, I have to say this is a good poem. I like the repetition of the last question with the added emphasis. To me it makes it seem like you are pleading for someone to say yes, they know the real you, or at least want to know the real you.

[H.E.]

You are the first one who ever commented on anything that I wrote and u have no idea how grateful I am, thank you so much! (encouraged me a lot...). My boyfriend and I going through a long distance period right now, so actually you are right, I am pleading for him to actually see/feel me, even though I am 1000s kms awaw :)

[Bradley]

You're welcome! I remember the first time someone reviewed one of my poems. It really does mean a lot, so I try to help others out the same way.

[Scott Metro]

Very nice...a simple thought expressed well.

Scott

[H.E.]

Thank you!

[Michelle De Jesus]

This is great, its so real. no one can ever imagine or really know you more than yourself.

[H.E.]

Thank you so much for commenting :)