Love Drunk II

He made me that special kind of drunk.

I could love you.
I know I could.

Already so intoxicated
by every word you say
like I am
that special kind of drunk.

You make me smile
and you make me laugh.
You make me crazy
and hot and bothered,
but sometimes you make me cry,

but none the less
you will always be the
coconut rum,
the cherry vodka
sliding through my veins.

The only true trail
that leads to my heart:
that i do believe
beats for you.

I could love you
I know I could
or maybe
I already
do.

Author's Note

Pleas give me some feedback whether it is good or critical. Thank You :)

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

It is good and critical .
Your philosophy of life and love
may be critical, but you have the
ability to write about it with with
deep concern and talent.
Very, very good.
----- John