Forget Me...Not

Sometimes it is better not to forget

A knock at the door,

but no one was there.

Left on the step,

a bouquet of flowers:

 

Bright blue

forget mes-

not what I'd expect

to get from you:

 

the man

who promised eternity

to a girl

who could only dream.

 

I wish these flowers could

serve a purpose

I wish that I could just

forget about you

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. I am open to honesty. Thank You :)

Reviews

[Empirik]

Great metaphor! It places space between you and the past for two to move on. The toughness of loves history is always important to realize. I like it!

[Marie]

Maybe flowers should be for forgetting as well as remembering...

[Distant horizons]

so much said in these few lines. but would we really feel better if our memory had an erase button? ...yeah, probably :)
excellent worderations as always

[Freeminded]

Thats awesome!! I love "I wish that I could just, forget about you" and am I right in saying the man doesn't want the girl (you?) to forget him...but the girl wants too. That is so orginal, never heard of that before.

I LOVE IT!!!