faith

When all hope is gone and tears fall down your face,

just close your eyes and dream again.

When tears begin to dry away look way up high

and just have faith.

Reviews

[sakshi arora]

nice one but I guess last line can be improvised and this thought can always be on one's mission board to realize the importance of optimism

[M.K. Jawdat]

a beautiful inspirational poem. Thanks for posting

[Zahra]

beautiful message really uplifting. Nicely penned

[Estefania G. Estrada]

Thank you all for reading and commenting. :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Well.... this accents a bit of the others...
I just read...the positiveness and the recovery...
the way the words relay in the lines...
resonates a fallen phoenix...to come back to life...

[FJ]

Short and to the point. As I read it I see myself looking toward the sky and recalling my faith. Thanks for a short, to the point poem.

[oscardelamarca]

seriously very very good, short, but comes to feelings and that is fine, enjoy it and I like your style, congratulations

[A. Amos]

This one was highly needed to lift falling spirit, the one I always thought stood tall...words of yours is pure form of magic and help millions to wake up their dying souls...