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A Poem by Evan Kleve

A ghostly tear
slipped
down her translucent cheek
as she stared at the floating boy
in front of her

"Why?"
She asked
Shaking her head.

He just smiled
and drew her into a hug
Which both could feel but not
And he whispered in her ear

"You didn't get
What I meant
when I said
I would follow you anywhere."

© 2011 Evan Kleve


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so simple but so sweet...i loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow !!! heartwarming ! what a creative simple piece... It just makes me illustrate a whole story in my mind... beautifully written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This sounds like a book I've read. Obviously, it's not overflowing with sharp vocabulary, but I like it because it's so quaint & simple. I like this.
PS - I'm not reviewing this because of your picture, I'm reviewing it because it's good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! This really got me thinking...(which is a compliment, because I don't like to think)
There is some mystery behind this, and left me wanting more...but I think that that's the beauty of it.....is there anyway you could write up a sequel?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, this had me staring at it for a moment before I could really think anything. It's so simple, yet much more. It's short, but the words can keep going forever. The perfect poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful! Simply exquisite! Short, simple, melancholic and chock full of emotion. Very raw, powerful yet gentle and just delicate. Lovely job! ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow so sweet am im almost in tears:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is such a sweet and sad poem. It's absolutle lovely! It flows perfectly and the meaning of the poem is beautifully shown. Fantabulous job!

I love the picture as well, it's really cute!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Very Lovely Poem. Its a ton better than any of the poems i've ever writen.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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