A Glimpse of the Future

I walked on the street,

with my bare, tired feet.

All I can smell

are polluted, stinky wells.

All I can hear,

are long forgotten fears.

How long has it been,

since I saw lively colors,

red, pink, yellow, green?

I miss the trees and flowers.

I used to run around fields,

fields filled with life.

I used to think our world was healed,

But we were all destined with strife.

But remember,

destiny doesn't pick you,

you pick it.

Our world is still alive,

barely breathing.

Death has not arrived,

…

let's make the right choice.

Author's Note

this was a poem I made for my science project

Reviews

[GodzillaGirl101]

Wonderful! This is perfect! (I'm going to write one now too :)

[Grey Evanescent]

I'll be waiting for that!

[GodzillaGirl101]

Okay, I made it. It's called Where Are We Headed. Check it out :)

[Percy Pound]

Good edit to an already great poem! Keep it up.

[Grey Evanescent]

Thanks a lot!

[Prantik Ali]

Loved it!!
Ur poems are always so good :)

[Grey Evanescent]

thank you! arigatou gozaimasu! :D

[Percy Pound]

Great poem; love the inspiration for it as well. Keep up the good work!

[Grey Evanescent]

thank you for loving my works ^-^