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A Poem by Red Brick Keshner
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Even if the body cannot, one must let their mind wander; But how far is too far?
Such delusions of happiness are rooted in (hu)men's nature to serve the purpose of survival and strive as a whole kind. The line between a madman and a genius is thin, so why not have more madmen if there is even a slim chance they can turn out to be geniuses? Perhaps, we should let others indulge in their desires until theirs conflict with ours or/and societal standards.
"But truly if it had been me personally, to be disillusioned; I would curse whoever had me taken away from my comfort first before I curse the cynical nature of my desires." - Dan Rastley

Regardless, a fascinating work, author Red Brick Keshner, is quite true in each and every word spoken.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Thanks kindly Stu! For me the writing is less the assertion of truth and more about the process and .. read more



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very nice Rick I'll keep coming back

Posted 3 Months Ago


Red Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Thanks rhj, you are much appreciated and always welcome here.
Not a good place to be. Sobering indeed and a huge learning experience into the bargain Freds. Well conveyed drop in the stomach feeling.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Yes, it isn’t Chris. Thanks.
Freds.
Yes what a conundrum. Trapped in your own making. Another fine write Red.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Thanks Andrew! Nothing like the feeling of being trapped.
andrew mitchell

4 Months Ago

Yes I’m familiar with that.
Welp, f**k. Don't like relating to that very much. Good words any way, word-boy.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Same here Blackbird, hence the wordage. 😉
Excellent writing. Enjoyed well

Posted 4 Months Ago


Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Cheers ATP🙏🏻
Even if the body cannot, one must let their mind wander; But how far is too far?
Such delusions of happiness are rooted in (hu)men's nature to serve the purpose of survival and strive as a whole kind. The line between a madman and a genius is thin, so why not have more madmen if there is even a slim chance they can turn out to be geniuses? Perhaps, we should let others indulge in their desires until theirs conflict with ours or/and societal standards.
"But truly if it had been me personally, to be disillusioned; I would curse whoever had me taken away from my comfort first before I curse the cynical nature of my desires." - Dan Rastley

Regardless, a fascinating work, author Red Brick Keshner, is quite true in each and every word spoken.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Thanks kindly Stu! For me the writing is less the assertion of truth and more about the process and .. read more
I had a few day like this dear friend. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

4 Months Ago

Thanks Coyote, that is much appreciated 🙏🏻
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.

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Red Brick Keshner
Red Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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My life is one poetic journey. If I am not reading or writing poetry, I simply live it. To me the experience of poetry should be such - to breathe it, create it, and receive it from poems and lives th.. more..

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