A Cloudy Dawn

Year poem was written: 2013

      The eyes of dazzlement peek open,

             refreshed and renewed.

       Darkness overshadowing it's glory,

             yet peace still shines through.

 

       Wonder and amazement viewed at the serene new day,

             still comes forward like a paint stroke on art.

        The sunrise blocked by the bulging grey clouds,

             it's grace remaining impenetrably stunning.

 

        A great portrait marked with imperfections,

            like any earthly paradise.

        Alluring every spirit by the mere sight,

            drawing us forth into the day.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The description is amazing. You brought to life visions of the birth of a new day. Good to see the new day with positive eyes and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ankit Mahar]

Man it is a good poem .but it hasn't got some real stuff to make it one of the best .it seems that you have some real potential .do bettIer from next time and try putting some rhymes .