OCEAN OF LIFE

The journey started must end, make the most of it ...................

    Ups and downs are the waves,
    of the ocean that we call life.
    Laughter and tears are the price,    
    we pay for this bumpy ride.    

    Glittering gold is a fallacy,
    we run after till we die.
    And while we make a living,
    we learn to cheat and lie.
    
    The part we play on this stage,
    is what we shall be remembered by.
    The ship that sailed into horizon,
    carried the soul that said Good bye.
        
    Colours of life are utter joy
    Selfish of me that I cry

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

laughter and tears as currency for life. I like that. Well penned

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a bunch dear.................

[s y e]

This is very well written and descriptive. In our story, we have a beginning a middle and an end... The same as we have in life. Our life is like an open book for the world to see. I loved this!

[WILDERNESS]

You are right, and lucky are the ones who get good lives to read and live with.........

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah cynical wisdom, good one.

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a bunch............

[Coyote Poetry]

'Colours of life are utter joy
Selfish of me that I cry'
A amazing poem filled with wisdom. I like the above closing lines. Good to know tears for the colours of life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a lot dear.............. real pleasure to have you visiting.

[Rose of many colours]

Very unusual piece of art. In life journey we have an ending just as we have a beginning.

[WILDERNESS]

You are very right................... Thanks for reading my work.

[melissa]

This amazing poem i can't wait to read more keep up the great work

[WILDERNESS]

I am so glad You like it................... Thanks

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Anita Singh]

Yet another amazing write from you. I wonder how you do this!? Write down these emotions so effortlessly? It feels like the words just flow from your heart smoothly to the pen. Its just amazing! Thank you for sharing!! :)

[WILDERNESS]

I guess it has come from heart to touch another heart. Inspirations of life prompt me to write. But your words humble me truly; surely I don't deserve such praise........................ and you are most welcome dear.