Poetic Breaths

Poetic Breaths

A Poem by Frieda P
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~insatiable poetry

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I breathe in this moment like a fickle lover
 to grasp you within my lungs
savoring every breathless last word
  filling with the very essence of your song
it stings like a bee on wildflowers in springtime
   as a drug  so deliciously potent, 
I can't get enough to quench the desire
  it floats within my heart on butterfly wings
ink drips upon the page like an ambrosial
 zephyr's
   sweet kisses upon my eyes and soul's embrace
gently soaring on memories of darkly posies
       this dance of poetry is sublime elation
 personified

© 2013 Frieda P


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You may breathe in air but you most definitely breath out poetry and fills the air for the rest of us to inhale. I found these lines to be sigh worthy:

ink drips upon the page like an ambrosial
zephyr's
sweet kisses upon my eyes and soul's embrace
gently soaring on memories of darkly posies

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anne, sigh worthy is an outstanding review...muchly appreciated my friend.



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Did my new Poetic series spark this for you? I really love the emotion you put into it... Great job

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Smart woman ;-)
Samantha ~virginpoet

6 Years Ago

lol yeah I started my poetic series over 2 years ago have written 20 or more of them lol did not mea.. read more
Samantha ~virginpoet

6 Years Ago

ugh don't know why it posted half my comment than the whole thing sooo annoying
Well I don't know which is more powerful or more palpable your intense admission of love or Lara Fabian's voice crying Je t'aime. Either one comes off powerfully.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Wow Astro, to be compared to Lara Fabian in any way, shape or fashion is intense, I just adore her p.. read more
Astro

6 Years Ago

I think you have more passion that she.
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Now you're just gonna make me *faint*....................
i try to imagine how such breathe would be like...for sure, amazing..

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks khalid, nice to see you on again....
"this dance of poetry is sublime elation personified"

And this poetry is like C.ontemplative P.oetic R.esuscitation (CPR)
Well done Frieda.
X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, I love that ANTnee, thanks so much! x
ANTO

6 Years Ago

Your welcome my friend - I may need CPR after you read my other review ...
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

It's fine, you're cute when you're angry. ;-)
An epic & eloquent masterpiece. You've been sharpening up your poetic penmanship on this one. Great work Frieda. A captivating write & read. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Bpoet, glad you enjoyed :-)
A walk in the lush gardens you create with your ardent words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks muchly annie lee...
sublime elation... ya most definitely. but darkly posies?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

So sue me. ;-)
Mark

6 Years Ago

I'll need an address.
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha you're absolutely correct, I still like how 'darkly' rolls off the tongue, that's my story and I'.. read more
Poetry... the air we breath at times, the steps we take or do not have the will to take, and the thing that touches us most deeply as well. Thank you for reaching our your poetic hand and touching my heart. Thank you for this kiss of thought and filling my lungs with the perfumed air of this poetic breath.
You have penned a gift... Oh, and the French are so passionate are they not?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

What a sweet review Scott, that's why we let them get away with being so snooty I suppose, ha...than.. read more
Great metaphors. I really like how you use them in this piece.
An inloved poet will always breathe through his/her poesy.
Great!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Grazie mille Marguerite!
to grasp you with my lungs..... love this

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

thanks so much Kleio...

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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