‘What’s In The Fold Of A Rose’

Love is an never ending flowing river connecting the end to the beginning ...becoming one...🌹

‘What’s In The Fold Of A Rose’

Continual

Caresses

It’s within
These petals
Where
Endless
Love
Expresses

The need
To flow free
Never ending
But always
Complete

Beyond
Words
And actions
Could ever
Speak

What is it
That you
Seek

Within
Each fold

A story’s
Told
When hearts
Grow cold
And petals
Die
Becoming
Old

The truth be told

If you hadn’t
Sold
Your soul
To conform
To a mold

Love
Would never
Grow cold
Or old

Look deeper
Within
The folds

Your story
Lies
Untold.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
22/02/20

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Kelly.
"Love
Would never
Grow cold
Or old"
When the love become cold and old. What is left? Love is like a garden. Need constant attention to grow and multiply. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes it does...heat and much attention ...nourishment down to the deepest roots...🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Kelly. Love need constant reminders.

[lightsong]

how lovely, how beautiful, how true are these words... now I know from where Your review came. You my brilliant Kelly are like the Rose having so much to say, so much to write about gifting us charming poetry filled with magic, beauty, love, understanding and knowing 💗🌹💗

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh you bring a smile to my face...Thankyou for the loving seeing you you are..mwah x🌹🌹🌹

[Neville]

I imagine there to be many secrets.. but then... I am just an incurable old romantic .. nicely poemed my friend..

Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

What would life be without hidden truths that need to be searched for and thought deeply about...that’s what makes us different...and how I love different...🌹

[Neville]

Hey, good to hear.. here, for you … 🌹

[emmajoy]

Methinks you know very well that..there's far more to the flush of a full rose than casual thought. So many have claim to having felt the magic of what is as much like Salome's seductive movements. . Especially when a warm breeze wafts that bloom's scent towards the senses. Seems your drifting language knows that or similar. It takes time to .. understand.. to be inspired by.. to love.. that little more.. time and time.. again.

Beautiful language, inspiring poetry, Kelly, and more than a little visual!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Bless your heart and yes the rose is the soul of our being and touched tenderly will unfold and enfold in the warmth and rhythm of love...Thankyou for visiting sending warm hugs and much comfort🌹

[emmajoy]

Received and truly valueD. So hope things are happy and settled in your world. Truly do. x

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

We go on in faith and gratitude in all...🌹🌹🌹

[emmajoy]

Best way. The only way for most of the time, then -add a few extras! Smiles ..

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kelly... a Woman is like a Rose with
Beauty within the folds... she holds a man’s heart. Our bodies are ready for making love as long as we have the desire to become a part of blooming when hearts are on fire. Truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh how beautiful are your words...wishing you are well🌹

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

That's lovely, Kelly.
The untold story of a rose🌹 lies within its fold, where love lives and beauty evolves. The story is far beyond what we can see, its deeper rhythm is written deep inside it.

Kudos!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for looking deeper I appreciate your time🌹

[AJNJ]

This is so beautiful. I never looked at a Rose this way. You’re a true poet at heart.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh how kind...my love of a rose shoes the deepest part of my soul...thankyou🌹

[AJNJ]

Welcome.....🌹