‘Near Or Far’

Wherever you are...I’m wishing on star....

‘Near Or Far’

Wishing on
A star

No matter
How near
Or
Far

May it fall
Where you
Are

May it warm
Your nights
And brighten
Your days
In more
Than
A thousand
Ways

May it reveal
The cards
That need
To get played
And all
The rhythms
To be swayed

Keep you from
Going astray

May it mount
On the beams
Of the moon

Reflecting
The souls
Goal

May your spirit
Be free
And bring you
Nothing
But
Harmony

I’m wishing
On a star

May it Touch
You
Where
You are.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
11/03/20

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' May it reveal .. The cards .. That need .. To get played .. And all .. The rhythms .. To be swayed ;'

Such wistful words and generous. Seems a call across space, Kelly.. a prayer perhaps as well as a song echoing everywhere, waiting to be heard. Beautiful.. finely written and more, far more. x

[AJNJ]

Wishing on a star...We often do it and yet the smooth, almost velvet way in which this poem flows, the gentle soothing rhyme and the heartfelt wishes for a loved one make it an amazing read for me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as light expressed...reminded me of that song...
i think a few times that star has fallen where i was...but hit me in the head...
so many times i have heart damage...
but there are other stars, other galaxies...and love finds a way.
somewhere out there....
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Beautiful are your words nd May the star of all love happiness and all things wonderful be close to you always....🌹🌹🌹

[light and ashes]

This is beautiful and wistful.
Reminds me of the Disney song, "When you wish upon a star."

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

May all your wishes come true....Thankyou...🌹

[light and ashes]

How sweet....thank you friend :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

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