Your words, My thoughts

You say I'm beautiful,

Well you clearly are blind,

You tell me I'm worth it,

What's wrong with your mind?

My eyes? They're the cutest in the world...

Well you obviously havn't seen the other girls...

You say I have an adorable laugh,

My laughter must fall on deaf ears,

But no matter how much I deny,

You don't give up,

Your love for me stronger than I could imagine,

My love for you, limitless.

We are together, forever,

As our hearts are entwined as one

Reviews

[Linear]

Love the diologue in this poem, it really made me want to read on, well done Jenny :O)

[Katub]

This is really sweet, they must really like you and I wish you'd see yourself through their eyes xx

[LoopyLoo]

This is good this :-) Tres Bien :-)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Because when they love you, only you exist in their heart. Good poem my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

When the love is true. The person is perfect is whatever they do. I like this poem. The description tells a story of real love and care. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

nice! (:

[Erinne S.]

Wow! That's all I'm going to say is wow. Loved it!

~Erinne