The weakness

As the moonlight shines down,

On your angelic face,

A tear rolls out of my eye,

The person I knew oh so well,

Was just a madman in disguise.

 

I loved you with all my heart,

Yet you tore away the layers,

Of my weak form of love,

Wiped away my tears,

With the hands, you broke me with.

 

What I don't understand,

Is why do you hurt me,

When you used to call me

You're precious gemstone,

Worth more than life itself?

 

Make up your mind baby,

Please give me an answer,

Did you ever love me?

Reviews

[lifesmith]

My biggest regret is not loving you. My biggest regret is realizing that you never loved me in return. On the bright side, as Sarah stated down there, it's the broken hearts that inspire the most beautiful poetry

[Sarah Morgan]

This is such an emotional write and I really loved it. It sad that most of the best poetry I've read comes from the heart-broken. You put yourself out there only to be shut-down or cast aside. I wish I didn't know heart-break, but I think everyone gets a taste now and then. Great write!

[Veronica Chandler]

This piece is beautifully written and I enjoyed the flow very much! Simply wonderful write Jenny. If only we all had the same definition for the little four letter word, "L O V E"

[Jess Holden]

I love your writing!!! It's all so beautifully paced and placed!!

[MIngram]

Very nicely done. Introspective thoughts said clearly and concisely.

[Ruth]

Such indecisiveness can destroy.....you verse that tension well love! xx

[Matthew vonHone]

Good work.

[misha]

this is a very sad poem, great write!

[nishantshah2381]

Did you ever love me?

the last line haunts every individual in this world

[Jazique]

The clasical question hate me or love me tell me the truth. nice job.