my fault..

When I kissed you, it was like a shock

something I've never felt

a spark of love lights in my heart

and all bad memories melt.

It was like an ice-cream on a sunny day

it's weird how it all works

I don't understand how I feel

but having you has it's perks.

I did love you, don't say I don't

because your eyes caused my smile

it's complicated, it always will be

if only I waited a while.

My head's messed up, I upset you lots

it;s my fault our love was lost

but always remember, look at the stars

I'm thinking of you from here till Mars.. 

Reviews

[HappyTaylor]

I love this a lot. At a loss for words really!

[The Doctor]

Again, shory but proves its point to the end. Very good job.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet and passionate, innocent even. Like it!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Simple love poem. You are good at this stuff, Jenny.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Love is remembered if good or bad ending. I like the description and the positive ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote