A Gal too Cute

A Gal too Cute

A Poem by Falcon1
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Life over the barrel

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A gal too cute



I meet a gal too cute
She has a face and a hot body
She sure turned me on for she was a hottie 
her smile made my leg stand at attention

Just a few things I would like to mention
She was head strong in my direction
I needed to shave and put on some protection
We when for a walk in the forest

Wouldn't you know the moment
I turned around I was lost
With the prettiest Gal I ever did see
A Gal to Cute for me

I had a lot of respect for thee
If she asked me to climb the tree
I would do it in seconds regardless of the damages
From head to toe for I'm not so nimble on my feet

and this feat I just can't complete
Her cute little pie put me in that barrel
Over the Nigeria the barrel did roll
She tried as hard to make me out to be the fool

A Gal too cute had ended my fate
My life was over on a barrel ride
Over the falls I fell so fast I knew My new life
Was not going to last

I went to the splash 
Of a Nigeria bash
Caught over the falls in a barrel 
I'm going to crash

© 2017 Falcon1


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A little too dangerous for me.
"A Gal too cute had ended my fate
My life was over on a barrel ride
Over the falls I fell so fast I knew My new life
Was not going to last"
I did like the above lines. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Falcon1

6 Years Ago

Thanks and keep being my poetry coach. Your the best ever.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
women will make you do strange things

Posted 6 Years Ago



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