Oblivion

JUst my new poem

My sorrow must end

I can’t defend

Anymore of myself

Bloody tears fall down my face

My eyes are worn

They’re shattered and torn

Out of place is what I’ve been told that I am

I should just find a new crush

But the rush 

Of hating myself in a relationship is

To much to bear

I am almost there

My hate and my fear

My depression and my anxiety

Is right here

Not tomorrow but today

Well actually I get defeated in every battle I fight

I have no might

Not over this

Can’t find the right way

I envy the happy everyday

Just to be left has no point

F**k, how can hate

Supposedly be my fate

Is it? I want to know

Just before I go

Just before I slip 

Into oblivion of you

Goodbye I would say

If there was any way

Author's Note

Honest oppinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have left cities and states to escape. But funny part. Everything came with me anyway. A powerful poem filled with anger and disappointment. Sometime we must be meaner and stronger. Can allow the things that hurt us to slow us down. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Brian Kraklau]

so sad, tears are only a memory remember good job tho

[Drako]

this is another strong piece. you're a gifted writer, and you make your reader's heart go out to you. as a reader, i feel the pain from you and hope that you will soon see brighter days. darkness can only last for so long