Drako

Drako

"

felt a sudden need to write poems lately

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http://www.drakosden.net
Saint Louis, MO
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Writing

Journeys

Journeys

A Book by Drako


Dare I Hope? Dare I Hope?

A Poem by Drako


Alone Alone

A Poem by Drako


I Never Knew I Never Knew

A Poem by Drako


Missing you Missing you

A Poem by Drako


Sea of Love Sea of Love

A Poem by Drako


Regret Regret

A Poem by Drako


Stupid Stupid

A Poem by Drako


Alone Alone

A Poem by Drako




About Me

I have many names, my actual name being brandon, but i go by Drako. I have been writing for years and discovered this site thanks to a friend on facebook.


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Posted 7 Years Ago


It's just fictionpress lol. Someone on here told me about it and had nothing bad to say about it, so I thought I would give it a try. So far, I don't have anything to write home about, but I've only had my work up since yesterday morning. The site stupidly requires you to upload the file first before you can publish it on the site, so each chapter needs to be in its own file, and I hate not being able to copy-pasta stuff from Word and have the format be the same for the site...actually, it seems impossible to create a line break in a story without adding some kind of symbol. And I miss not having a category that's solely for gayness. But the site loads at least, and it has given me a chance to make a few minor edits to Getting By lol. I figured I'd give it a few more days and if I don't have much luck with reviews, then I'll probably take everything down.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh, ok.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Yeah, but what I think he was trying to get at is that she has the same personality as the f*g hags you see everywhere else.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. I'm not entirely happy with it and knew there was something missing (more like more than one thing), but I kind of had to give up after spending an entire day on it. At least I now have an idea on what kind of feedback I should be expecting in class. XD

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Posted 8 Years Ago


well hello :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks again for the reviews. I know what you mean about the contractions thing. I want to use them because you're right about them sounding better than the two separate words, but I think I remember reading that most publishers don't want to see those in the narration in a manuscript, so I don't use them.

Oh, and thanks for catching my "bud out"s lol.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks for the reviews. They're much appreciated. :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Hey, thanks for the review.
You were right, the poem is about a certain kind of anger, fed up emotional games ect. I'm pleased someone else got that from reading it.
:)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


You probably could get Cena depushed.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


I was waiting for you to rage. I'm on it.