I Call You Out

I call you out..

Will you be silent?

Or will you slash me in my deepest thoughts and fears..

Will this scar me more than I already am?

You’re like a b***h from a b*****d sea..

Honest to god..

I know that someday you’re going to break me down..

Yet you already have..

But you don’t know how I feel..

Even though I’ve told you a thousand times..

I love you..

But never will you see the darkness brewing in my heart..

I love unconditionally..

That’s what gets me hurt..

All the time..

I’m so lost in these thoughts..

In all these lies..

I don’t know you anymore..

And I still contemplate if I’ve ever known you..

But I guess I’ll never find out..

But I cannot..

Neither end this..

Or fall from your grace..

This hero can’t rise till he lies in the glamour and grace of his eternal corpse bride..

All he needs is suffering apparently..

Death and destruction for all of us..

Apparently..

So just lay me in my cold grave..

I still believe in nothing though..

There’s nothing I can relate to anymore..

So I guess..

I’m still just A Fallen Hero to you..

And as I hail king scum..

I will bow to no one..

Reviews

[Brook Hughes]

Very confused but confident poem. i like it! pretty cool how in ur poems u refer to King Scum. dont really understand what that portrays but great work:)

[Rae]

Very unique. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep writing!!

[OtherWorldWoman]

I really like this. It was amazingly different and I enjoyed that. I can really feel the emotional downpull of this poem and I don't know you, but I hope you are okay--as it is a very intense release of words. Well done though!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I will bow to no one.. a most strong ending to a torris affair, well done, good read.

[Tasha]

Great ending.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Black]

no weakness,
only strenght,
to i find a sadness in this poem
it really is sad!

[Inyourshadow]

love the ending no one should bend a knee to any other but God and the Queen, you really put a lot of strength and energy into this piece, keep em' coming

[Dayran]

When the hero sees his face reflected and he sees it for the first time, he shall rise.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You penned this poem beautifully.

[Carrion.]

personally, i think instead of two dots on the last line should be one. but then again maybe not o.O"
but i really like it. its pretty and deep with emotion :3