Wonder Girl

If you are the moon,

Then I will love to be the only star around you.

If you are the ocean,

Then I will be the only ship sailing in you,

Whenever you thunder yourself,

I will be the clouds to shower rain

Girl, I'll be your hope,

And you'll always be my belief.

You're that rain

Which showers itself on dry soil.

That music which I listen the most always reminds me of you.

If you ever feel lost,

Seek yourself from my heart.

You won't be alone anymore,

When our souls intertwine.

You're the wish,

I've wanted to be true.

You're one of the best gifts

God has ever granted me.

If you are a book,

Then I will love to be the best pages in your chapter.

You are my vision,

You are always in my dreams,

Till now, you were the only flower in the pot,

But now as you've got me,

Together we will make a beautiful life like a garden.

Author's Note

Yes, she's my friend..just letting her know that the world hasn't ended, she was special she is special and she always will remain special.. your reviews will help her to know.

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

That musics (MUSIC) which I listen the most
You're one of the best gift(GIFTS)
or You're the best gift

Wow Farhan...its simply fab....loaded with feelings and love....
Any girl would fall for this...
Poetically it's beautiful...i loved the words ... They create magical ambience... Great job ... wish you all the very best
..looking forward for more

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😄

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared for love. I loved the complete poem. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Leo]

Wow I can relate to these selfless words of comfort..very romantic poem indeed..checkout angelic girl and dada on my page..when I read your words I felt it was a mirror to my own dangg :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Sure... thanks

[Joey Nizz]

This write is full of pure emotions and real feelings, this poem has touched all of us readers. Well done Farhan, this was an amazing piece of writing!

[amethyst1998]

You're a keeper . She's so lucky to have you .

[Chase Dylan]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

I will be your only, your one and... The only ship to sail... A deep feeling from that line alone... Deep as a fathomless sea of longing...

[Sira YR]

Yet again, you touch me with another wonderful piece. The only thing I would tell you is to divide it into stanza- like skip a line every so often. I would recommend skipping a line after "And you'll always be my belief", "When our souls intertwine", and "God has granted me". I would also recommend that you put the line "If you are a book, then I would love to be the best pages in your chapter"- i would put that line at the beginning after "If you are the ocean I would be the only ship sailing in you," because where it is now, it's kind of awkward and seems as if it was just put in there. But other than that it was a really beautiful poem accompanied by a wonderful picture.

[natzky]

such a good read..well, it happens when someone is special to us we tend to build a fence and protect them with all our might..ahahaha..lolz

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha l! Thanks so much 😄

[natzky]

welcome..continue on writing:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

I will for sure

[Im His Daughter]

Wow this was good! The only part I personally would have changed would've been to, If you were thunder... that's the only part I would've changed... This was amazing.. thanks for writing it!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😄

[Accalia]

This is simply a amazing poem! I believe that anyone would be honored and truly grateful to have an truly amazing friend like you. From this piece I can tell that you are someone who says what they mean, doesn't go back on their words, is caring and will be loyal to whoever you are friends with as well as to the people you are close to in your life. Again this is an wonderful piece! Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😄

[Zephyr]

All the writers have pretty much said everything I wanted to say:)
This wonderful poem will surely delight your wonder girl:)