We'll never get free

Song based on the crimes increasing in India...when the 7 year old gets raped by politician and yet justice remains

Lookin in my eyes..

Tell me it's all fine..

All the people are happy

And innocence didn't die..

Silence is vanished

And the violence we've gone through

Feelings are perished

Chaos to rendezvous

We'll never get free

From this agony of slaughter

What should we do

When there's toxins in water

The price to be paid has always been harder

Will we ever get through?

From this agony of slaughter..

Look me in my eyes

Say, that clouds are not dark

The gust of wind stopping

Crowded rides in the park.

Not that seesaw is swinging

Empty in the grass

Not the children are hidden

In their mother's arms..

We'll never get free

From this agony of slaughter

What should we do

When there's blood in the water

The price of the freedom is always been higher.

Will we ever get through

From this agony of slaughter..

 

Reviews

[Anjali]

This piece is very thought provoking... It has the spirit of making a change or difference in the world. It's true too.. the way you've written it is amazing! Keep up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Anjali

[Anjali]

you're welcome!

[Zoya]

A poor seven-year-old lay dead there, and here we were, making religion a weapon, unnecessarily complicating the case.
I think that was quite deep, some really nice metaphors in there.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right you are Zoe...thanks

[Zoya]

No worries

[¿]

I think a disgusted mind can never change nor any kind of powerful soap like thing can vanish their disgusting deeds done in this green world......
One rises and other mutes....for how long?!
#JusticeForAsifa

[Farhan Shaikh]

Crrct words...

[AllauraRose]

This is a very beautifully written poem, sadly it is about such a sad and unjust thing. I am sorry to hear about what is going on and I can only hope it gets better. Best of luck, Allaura.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for your review...😄

[Haniya]

Very well written; brings out the emotions in the reader.
I wish all the good people in the world could join together and try to prevent crime somehow.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for that haniya

[wordman]

loved the song,but the reason for it is sad,it seems to be getting worse

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right Mr.Wordman...thanks for the review

[wordman]

you`re welcome